Thread:Profiler10/@comment-26664217-20180114225550/@comment-31999953-20180116204611

Ok no problem. When an episode doesn't include a scene where the BAU gives a profile to officers like in Submerged, I go through the episode scene by scene and take the parts that are them profiling the unsubs and, if I need to, change the wording. Just instead of leaving the section empty. When I do that, my goal is to make the paragraph sound like something Hotch or Rossi, etc. would actually say in an episode. Now I haven't stopped to think if that has been the case with the last few unsubs so I'd like you to read the profile I wrote of Jess, which has been changed slightly like I described, and tell me if you think I have done what I wanted to do. Does it make sense now?