Thread:Profiler10/@comment-26664217-20180114225550/@comment-31999953-20180116203013

It's nothing serious but it would be a help to me as the author of these articles. This is something I also asked Echo Spy to do as well but seeing as you're keeping a watchful eye on the pages I thought I'd ask you as well, if you don't mind that.

When an episode airs and it doesn't include a scene where a profile is delivered, for the sake of completing that section, I tend to go through the episode bit by bit and picking out the parts that fit the bill but, where appropriate, paraphrase it as best I can in a way so that it sounds like something they would say actually giving the profile. I just felt that some pages were missing that flare that came with the BAU delivering the profile of an unsub if that makes sense but I never actually stopped to think if I was actually accomplishing that. If it isn't too much trouble, could you read the profile I put together of Jess Carney and let me know what you think. Apart from one sentence where they are mentioned, do you think it sounds like something the BAU would say in an episode?

For the version closest to what will be used, I'd check the fourth samdbox on my page. I've made minor changes since I last looked at Jess' actual page. Like I said, it may not seem practical but knowing if I'm completing my goal would be a help to me personally.